Blog 19

First slide- name and topic/title

Slides 2-6—main point from your paper: background, problem, solution, resources, list of sources

Slide 7- Questions?

A good power point has about thirty words at max per slide 

Center your words and keep the font large 

Make sure your font is light and background is dark 

15 points worth due next Thursday 

15 points are also available for uploading items to your class portfolio.

Items:

First paper-exploration, graded copy I gave you 

Second paper- annotated bib and outline. Graded version I gave you

Third paper- research paper, graded version

Two short writing assignment (your choice- Chernobyl email)

Paper from another class (can’t be from English 1010)

Cover letter/reflection: 

Write a letter to a future student who will take 1020.

15 points for the portfolio contents. Label everything 

Cover letter is worth 30 points. 

Practice for your cover letter. 

Imagine that a future student ask you how hard is it to write a research paper for 1020?

Using reasons, evidence, and logos, answer theirs question in about 300 words or so.

In English 1020 the research paper is probably one of the most stressful things that could possibly come about during the class if you wait till the last minute to actually start thinking critically about the paper. While I look back on my paper, I realize I did not put as much thought in the paper in the beginning as a should have. When this research paper first got brought up is when I should have actually sat down and thought about a realistic topic instead of waiting until three days before its due to change my topic. Your topic should be what you base your research around, and if you change your topics around you are messing with all the research you have already established in the annotated bibliography. Going through out the class, Dr. Howard mentions the importance of finding research for your paper. Not just summarizing the article and the research of the source, but actually finding information to back up your claims. I wish I would have taken this into consideration before the week the paper was due instead of rushing to find sources that back up what I am trying to prove.  

Blog 18

Conclusion:

Blog 16 was supposed to be the conclusion.

High school conclusions are like: 

In conclusion…

Restate your main points 

Summarize the whole paper 

Conclusion: 

Keep doing the high school thing to start. 

Think about what research you weren’t able to complete because of length. State the limitations of your study 

Hypothesize what might be needed in the future.

Be careful: Avoid fallacies. 

Error in reasoning.

Slippery slope: 

If my plan is adopted, the world will be saved from all tornadoes, and then in the future all people will not even have to prepare for tornadoes because my plan is so great. Then all the countries will find peace with one another, and everyone will leave happily ever after.

Ad hominem- be careful not to insult or put down other plans or solutions.

My solution works best because…

Joe Smith’s solution is so terrible, and I think he’s a terrible person. 

People tend to have the act II problem. 

(you’re tired by the end)

Don’t place loaded guns on the dresser in Act I when they aren’t going to go off in act II. The gun has to go off in act II if it’s there. 

Ex: 

Although most people think men aren’t going to. Cook or prepare food for families, I am going to show that they do.

The paper was then about how to cook spaghetti. Men and women weren’t even a factor in the paper. 

WORKS CITED 

(this is part of the same document) 

Why is leaving off a works cited page like a gun that doesn’t fire? 

You need a works cited to find out WHERE INFO IS COMING FROM. That is where I follow the trail. 

Organized alphabetically, double spaced, hanging indents at the second and third line. 

Author last name. only include sources on your list that you actually use. 

Blog 17

Cameron McCormick 

English 1020

Dr. Howard 

4/9/19

Alexandria 

            Alexandria is one of the top safe zones in the hit television series The Walking Dead.According to fandom.com, “to date, this is the longest lasting location in which survivors have lived, with the life span of three years.” Alexandria started with a man named Rick started the building of the wall to surround the borders of the area. 

Blog 16

Though the hospital is above ground, there are people who disagree with me on why I chose to have my shelter above ground. Cresson Kearney’s book Nuclear War Survival Skillsdescribes in chapter five that if the shelter were not in a place where the attack has taken place, even if the winds were to carry the toxins in the air or the winds were strong enough from the blast, buildings may not be structurally supported enough to withstand. This book is discussing why shelters should be underground. This book is also dated and as we discussed earlier, above ground structures can be a valuable resource. Though the hospital does not have a basement we can through everyone in, even if it did have a basement, I do not believe we would have as much space needed to house as many people who will need to get away from the blast. I also believe that there would not be any way to have all the medical supplies needed in a basement to help people in need of medical attention.As I mentioned before from the CDC, the toxins in the air settle on the side of the building and the roof. As long as we take precaution such as staying on the lower levels and away from the outer walls, everyone should be safe in an above ground building. 

            Baptist East is a great start to keeping the survival rates high when a tragedy like this occurs. My plan is just a small piece of what needs to be done. In the event of a nuclear attack I believe that there needs the be designated plan of action to be brought in to place. The hospital would be a good start for a safe shelter, but I do believe that there could be more options to where shelters could be. More safety guidelines she be published for people who are not in the direct blast zone but will be affect by the radiation. Even a designated safe area could be brought into the picture for people who do not have the resources to protect themselves. I believe that more can be done to educate people about nuclear warfare and on how to keep our citizens of Montgomery Alabama safe. 


bLog 15 Rough* Draft

Cameron McCormick 

Dr. Howard 

English 1020 

4/4/19 

Rough Draft 

Montgomery Alabama is home to about 200,000 citizens. Montgomery is also the state’s capital. Here in the city, you have state buildings, government buildings which include the governor’s office, and city official buildings. The normal day in Montgomery could be described just like any other day, kids would go to school, adults would go to work, you could go walking downtown by the river walk, or go shopping at the Eastchase shopping centers. 

I chose the topic of nuclear disaster to advertise the fact that we are not prepared for a nuclear attack. With the possibility of nuclear attacks from all across the world, what would the population of Alabama do? Do we have safe areas near our cities? If people were contaminated by the radiation, where could people go for treatment, and where could a good treatment center be placed. What needs would people to take with them for the bare minimum. I believe that the human race would be at a complete loss and wouldn’t know how to react.

It would be hard to believe a nuclear attack would happen so close to home. People always so “it will never happen to us” until it actually does. In the event of a nuclear attack, I am proposing ways to prepare a fallout plan for people to go in time of need as well as finding medical treatment. 

Here are some definitions that will help you throughout this paper. I got my definitions from dictionary.com.

-radiation: the process in which energy is emitted as particles or waves. (more will be added here)

During the advancement of technology in our time, there has been a new founded app known as “deepfake.” This app allows anyone to put a face on top of someone else’s face and make videos of that person doing whatever the person behind the app wants. While watching the news, there was a video of President Trump declaring that the United States does not want any affiliation with North Korea and disrespected the North Korean supreme Leader. This was a video that has been deep faked and President trump so happened to be the victim. After the video of fake President Trump went viral, it has made its way to North Korea who has been known to have advancements in nuclear warfare. North Korea’s leader Kim Jong-un responded with the threat of destroying the United States and has set up coordinates of where the major strikes would be. One of the strikes so happened to be in our hometown of Montgomery Alabama. This was not something to take lightly. When Korea made it known that this was a serious threat, there was only little time to find shelter, resources, and other ways to protect ourselves from what was coming. 

In the event of a nuclear disaster, where would the people of Montgomery go? Here in Alabama there used to be fallout shelters during the Cold War when nuclear weapons were a threat on the United States. Since then most of the buildings that were considered safe have now been torn down or turned into something else. According to Jim little from AL.com, “Madison County, the location of Huntsville and Redstone Arsenal, is one of the only counties in the country with an active fallout shelter program.” How would this help the Montgomery area population? By the time we got the warning for the Nuclear threat, there would not be enough time to drive all the way to Huntsville for protection. The best protection around here we could possibly find would be in the basement of a house or inside of a reinforced building. The fact there is not a local fallout shelter around the Montgomery area is enough reason to build one or even inspect the buildings in Montgomery to be considered a fallout shelter.

To begin preparation for the attack I believe we need to start with where a good location of shelter would could be. Cresson Kearny has a book titled Nuclear War Survival Skills, and in chapter five of this book, it is stated that the best place for a shelter would be underground. The winds and toxins that are carried from the blast could protentional destroy the exterior of the building and allow all the toxic materials to reach the inside. The winds and blast could be unusually strong and could instantly cause a tall building to collapse on the people inside. In the hit television show, American Horror Story: Apocalypse, there has been a similar life changing event that affects the entire world as I am trying to warn people about. Nuclear weapons were being launched all across the world that will destroy life as we know it. In this television series, there have been chosen ones to be taken to a secret underground location where the nuclear blast and radiation cannot reach. In this bunker there is a process to get in if you were coming in from the outside to prevent the radioactive toxins from reaching the living quarters. In this bunker you were provided room, clothes, and all the basic needs like food and water while supplies lasted. When supplies got low, there was a time of rationing until there was a way the survivors could find a way to obtain more materials. In my vison, I plan to have a similar layout where I am able to house a few hundred people to protect them from the tragedy out in the world.

When the time does come, people will need treatment. I feel a treatment center would be best underground where most of the harmful air could not come in contact with anyone inside. For people who are coming to the shelter just for protection, the bare minimum that should be brought have been describe by Dave Mosherin his article “Fallout Protection: What to Know and Do about Nuclear Attack.” In this article it is explained to bring the basics of a real radio, small protein bars, water, and any medications needed. For patients that need medical attention, they can come to the shelter. Also from “Annals of Emergency Medicine” from Kristi Koenig, she has provided charts on exposure times and how to treat the reactions. In my shelter I plan to follow these charts to treat my patients. 

 A safe location for my treatment center would most likely be in a basement or an already underground storm shelter. A basement of a hospital would be the best location because I could move equipment from the hospital to help treat the ones who need it. The hospital itself would be a good place if we were able to fortify it from the outside. We could use the rooms for people to stay, and even use the medical rooms themselves to keep contaminated patients away from everyone else.  

P.s. Please don’t judge me to hard on this because this was not one of my best works. I promise my final will be ten times better

Blog 14

In the hit television show, American Horror Story: Apocalypse, there has been a life changing event that affects the entire world. Nuclear weapons were being launched all across the world that will destroy life as we know it. In this television series, there have been chosen ones to be taken to a secret underground location where the nuclear blast and radiation cannot reach. In this bunker there is a process to get in if you were coming in from the outside to prevent the radioactive toxins from reaching the living quarters. In this bunker you were provided room, clothes, and all the basic needs like food and water while supplies lasted. When supplies got low, there was a time of rationing until there was a way the survivors could find a way to obtain more materials. In my vison, I plan to have a similar layout where I am able to house a few hundred people to protect them from the tragedy out in the world. 

            In the move,I am Legend, was about a character whom was played by will smith who was the only survivor of a breakout that turned humans into cold blooded creatures. Will smith was left in New York city with his medical supplies and his best friend which was a dog. Will Smith’s character was trying to come up with a medical treatment to cure these creatures from this horrible breakout. He captured one of these creatures and took it to his lab in the basement that was also fortified so nothing could get in. In my plan for an underground bunker, it is not just a place people could come to be safe from the disaster, it is also a place where survivors of the blast could come and get treatments for any deformities or injuries that have been caused from the nuclear attack. 

Review blog

Using pop culture in body paragraphs 

Iceberg technique-

Go below the surface 

Follow different links, trails, show the effort you made in investigating

Starts w/ a plain google search- when you find those hits, read them, and explore what sources they use, this especially true of Wikipedia.

Buzzfeed.com and sites like this use “clickbait” to get you to visit them. 

Avoid Britannica.com and other .coms that act like encyclopedias. They are too watered down for you. 

They make it look like you’re staying in the shallows. You need to be “far from the shallows now” as lady gaga says. 

Now you need a specific thesis that focuses on a solution the solution is the major part of the paper. 

In your blog write down at least 5 examples of how characters solve problems in the particular episode of Greys Anatomy. This episode is “out of nowhere.”

-Richard suggested old fashion hospital methods

-Richard uses a newspaper to determine if there was blood in the patience belly 

-richard tells how to treat the asthma reacton without the pill flip and dip

We started with a topic back in January- water supply in Montgomery, hurricane damage, zombies, etc. 

Feb/March- moving toward a hypothesis and then a thesis- getting specific

The way to get specific is to focus on the solution.

At this point, details about your solution need to be in your thesis statement 

During the apocalypse everyone needs to share. (very vague)

Zombies are bad- let’s make things better. (vague)

During a computer outage in a hospital, everyone needs to be comfortable using handheld tools like paper, pen, ice buckets, and newspapers. (not vague) 

How to deal with life when there is no electricity in Montgomery due to blackout. 

Paragraph about handheld tools: 

One of the ways that residents of the city can survive the problem is to trust older members of their communities. In the popular tv show Grey’s Anatomy, and episode titled “Out of Nowhere” shows how an experienced, older doctor named Richard helps younger doctors use paper charts and ice to help people in the ER. A computer hacker makes all the medical records inaccessible, so Richard trains the interns to take notes on these paper charts. Later, he also advises one of them to use a bucket of ice to cool of someone who had no access to pills who needed his heart rate to drop. Although the show is fictional, Richard’s way of training people will resemble my own way of training people in Montgomery. I will hold workshops…. And so on….


Blog 13

In the event of a nuclear disaster, where would the people of Montgomery go? Here in Alabama there used to be fallout shelters during the Cold War when nuclear weapons were a threat on the United States. Since then most of the buildings that were considered safe have now been torn down or turned into something else. According to Jim little from AL.com, “Madison County, the location of Huntsville and Redstone Arsenal, is one of the only counties in the country with an active fallout shelter program.” How would this help the Montgomery area population? By the time we got the warning for the Nuclear threat, there would not be enough time to drive all the way to Huntsville for protection. The best protection around here we could possibly find would be in the basement of a house or inside of a reinforced building. The fact there is not a local fallout shelter around the Montgomery area is enough reason to build one or even inspect the buildings in montgomery to be considered a fallout shelter.

blog 12

Body Paragraphs:

-Explaining what you introduced in the previous paragraph

-ORDER 

-Has more “stuff,” more explanations than other parts.

-one major point, usually in beginning or even the end 

-offer evidence of your major point 

Major point or topic sentence

Evidence to support it 

Link to the next paragraph

How is a body paragraph different in English 1020 than in 1010?

-research conversation happens 

Visit a website and read an article by an undergrad. Skim it.  Look for five examples (in the body paragraphs) where the authors “enters conversation” with another perspective or source. 

Examples of conversation from biker article:

Negri, Alberta. Underneath the Leather Jackets and Chrome Pipes: Research into a Community of LocalBikers.” Queen City Writers, vol. 5, no. 2, Spring 2017, https://qc-writers.com/2017/11/09/1192/.

  1.  When my friend was first approached by an active member of the Squad, his apprehension was evident: “I remember thinking, like, ‘I can’t be associated with them, they’re a crazy group of hoodlums. It’s just bad news, I’ll get into so much trouble…’” (Thomas).
  • However, after a thirty-five-minute interview with one of Thomas’s closest friend in the Squad, it became more obvious that there is a true gradient of skill level in this group. “[There are] definitely some guys out here with us that could put us all in our place… Always popping wheelies and pushing their engines so fast your head would spin. They do a lot of that in smaller groups on Saturday nights. Then we got kids like Tom and I, newbies that would freak with pushes like that” (Jackson).
  • In her article “Discourse Communities and Communities of Practice: Membership, Conflict, and Diversity,” she writes, “[Members] often must drop, or at least diminish in importance, their affiliations to their home cultures in order to take on the values, languages, and genres of their disciplinary culture…[and] must make choices between their communities and academic lives” (Johns 513). 
  • They commented on how rarely they saw him around the apartment, only knowing when he returned by the creaking of the front door at 1:00 a.m. after long rides. He missed dinners, forgot chores. “There really was a time when I didn’t see him for three straight days, which is insane since we were so close and I’m literally his roommate and always used to see him. But I mean I figured he was just having fun so I didn’t say anything about it, I guess” (Andrew).
  •  In “Identity, Authority, and Learning to Write in New Workplaces,” Wardle explains, “[P]articipation in new communities requires accepting for oneself identities that are odds with the values of other communities to which one belongs” (289). 

Blog 11

During the advancement of technology in our time, there has been a new founded app known as “deepfake.” This app allows anyone to put a face on top of someone else’s face and make videos of that person doing whatever the person behind the app wants. While watching the news, there was a video of President Trump declaring that the United States does not want any affiliation with North Korea and disrespected the North Korean Prime Minister. This was a video that has been deep faked and President trump so happened to be the victim. After the video of fake President Trump went viral, it has made its way to North Korea who has been known to have advancements in nuclear warfare. North Korea responded with the threat of destroying the United States and has set up coordinates of where the major strikes would be. One of the strikes so happened to be in our hometown of Montgomery Alabama. This was not something to take lightly. When Korea made it known that this was a serious threat, there was only little time to find shelter, resources, and other ways to protect ourselves from what was coming.